Sometimes, I need to get a thought out of my head; to set a feeling free; to let words create a trail that i can trace back. Sometimes, I need to write a poem.
Saturday, March 24, 2007
What do empty words contain?
There was a pause A sentence gulped A hope submerged Into the fear Of uncertainty.
And then A series of silence Followed a series Of empty words.
Beautiful, touching, turns you numb. And an amazing structure too... reducing verbosity in the flow of the poem adds to the visual effect of the parting. And the last stanza with a single word "Further" is killing. Wow! mind blowing! Cheers, Meenakshi
how far, how close, you are just in a circle... beat the line and come around you will, to me... or may be this time the force of centrifuge will give us a refuge indeed further away from each other...
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and you have started writing again!!! :)
Beautiful, touching, turns you numb.
And an amazing structure too... reducing verbosity in the flow of the poem adds to the visual effect of the parting. And the last stanza with a single word "Further" is killing. Wow! mind blowing!
Cheers, Meenakshi
Hi Minakshi, you're generous in your praise. Thanks :)
how far, how close,
you are just in a circle...
beat the line and come around
you will, to me...
or may be this time
the force of centrifuge
will give us a refuge
indeed further
away from each other...
hey babes, jus ramblin again:)
never mind!
Reaper, you are one awesome rambler! :P
there is always an awesome
poet(ess) behind an awesome rambler...:)
....series of silence....
ghadi ghadi drama karta hai...
Keep up the good work.
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