Monday, January 29, 2007

Jaded

I surged towards the sand
Time and again,
But it failed to soak me in.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Jaded yet Absorbing lines !!

Anonymous said...

and I wonder,
whether it's the sand or it's me
my waves too strong
too restless
to be soaked...

just blurting again:)
your poems always make me feel as if they are written for me...

Black Tulip said...

Blueink: Thanks..

Reaper: Some of your poems also make me feel the same. You carried this one forward for yourself.. my waves are more on the calmer side :)

Anonymous said...

well the sands of time will always bury you...eventually.