Sometimes, I need to get a thought out of my head; to set a feeling free; to let words create a trail that i can trace back. Sometimes, I need to write a poem.
Wednesday, February 14, 2007
Parting
I haven’t written to you in a long time The lines have dried into a dull ache Which has stretched itself upto you, But not quite.
My love is as simple as breathing And you, as immense as life Yes, you know that you’re missed, But not quite.
11 comments:
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how does one find such subtle words to express sadness?
no no lady, you gimme more credit than i deserve... THAT my princi sr D'souza used to say...only instead of "flick of fingers" it was " slip of tongue":) ...n no i was kidding too, i didn't think it was rude..:)
11 comments:
how does one find such subtle words to express sadness?
Hey.. what's up. You still write awesome !
hmmm ...love? simple ? i dont understand the connection
hmmm ...love? simple ? i dont understand the connection
"My love is as simple as breathing"
then you are blessed girl...:)
"My love is as simple as breathing"
then you are blessed girl...:)
"My love is as simple as breathing"
then you are blessed girl...:)
Khotta: they are all there interspersed with the emotion, no? :)
Vijit: hey, good to see u back!
Chetan sir: we all understand love as per our own experiences of it.. for me its effortless.. simple.. :)
Reaper: Im blessed threefolds! ;)
flick of the finger
is no fault of mind
and one who reminds
is most unkind...:)
oho! LOL
ur awesome, really. can make up a poem on anything!
btw, sorry if you thought it rude. wasnt meant to be :)
no no lady, you gimme more credit than i deserve... THAT my princi sr D'souza used to say...only instead of "flick of fingers" it was " slip of tongue":) ...n no i was kidding too, i didn't think it was rude..:)
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